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My MIL Told Me She’d Name My Baby Since We Lived in Her Apartment
When my husband, Jake, and I found out we were expecting, we were over the moon. The timing wasn’t perfect—we were still getting back on our feet financially—but we were determined to make it work. To save money, we temporarily moved into Jake’s mother’s apartment. It was supposed to be a short-term arrangement, just until we found a place of our own.
His mom, Linda, had always been… involved. She had an opinion on everything, from what I cooked to how I cleaned. But when we told her about the baby, her excitement quickly turned into something else—control.
“I’ll help you pick the baby’s name,” she announced one evening at dinner.
I laughed, assuming she was joking. “Oh, we’ve already started making a list,” I said.
She didn’t laugh. She just nodded and took another bite of her food.
Days passed, and her comments got bolder. “You know, since you’re living under my roof, it’s only fair I have a say,” she said casually while folding laundry. “In my culture, elders choose the names. It’s a sign of respect.”
Jake squeezed my hand, trying to smooth things over. “Mom, we appreciate your input, but this is our decision.”
She pursed her lips and muttered something under her breath. That was the first sign of trouble.
One afternoon, I came home to find Linda on the phone with one of her friends. “Yes, I’ve already picked a name,” she was saying proudly. “He’ll be called Robert, after my father.”
I stopped in my tracks. Robert? Jake and I hadn’t even discussed that name. We didn’t even know if we were having a boy or a girl yet!
“Linda,” I said, trying to keep my voice calm, “we haven’t chosen a name yet.”
She waved me off. “It’s already decided.”
That was the last straw.
That night, Jake and I had a serious talk. We couldn’t keep living under her roof if it meant giving up control over our own child. We found a tiny but affordable apartment across town. It wasn’t much, but it was ours.
When we told Linda we were moving, she acted like we had betrayed her. “After everything I’ve done for you? I give you a place to stay, and this is how you repay me?”
“Mom, we’re grateful,” Jake said gently, “but this is our family. We need to make our own choices.”
She didn’t speak to us for weeks. But when our baby girl, Emma Grace, was born, she finally softened. “Emma,” she said, holding her granddaughter for the first time. “I guess that’s a nice name.”
It wasn’t Robert, but it was perfect. And best of all, it was ours.
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